Show Don’t Tell
The buildings were tall.
The buildings cast a towering shade.
Sarah was really upset.
I could sense the despair in Sarah’s eyes.
She was so happy to see him.
She was ecstatic at the thought of his arrival.
The lake was beautiful.
The lake was glistening against the blistering sun.
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